Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Senin Vant/Legends

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Senin Vant

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Maybe expansion possible? Any ideas?

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. NaruHina ^Talk 02:11, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. —Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 10:17, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 22:01, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
4. Thank you for your hard work.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Rubedo
   • Context on the Battle of Utapau and the Clone Wars. Give a time reference.
   • You could also explicitly say the Skyforce was the Utapauan air force.
   • While we're at it, context on Utapau. NaruHina ^Talk 18:49, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
     • All fixed. Any idea Naru if I can bring him up to 250 words. I added much context, but this stuff is all relevant to him. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:59, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
       • Deja vu... NaruHina ^Talk 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
   • How do you know if this is a male or female? They look very similar to me.
     • Said in the book.
   • Mention the Complete Cross-Sections in the BTS.
     • Added.
   • The page in the Cross-section was not about him. Clairify that it was on his ship.
     • Hope that's better.
   • His eyes don't look blue to me. They look black. If you include this in the infobox, include it in the article.
     • Changed and added.
   • How do you know he was affiliated with the Repuclic? Just because he fought alongside their forces to free his planet, does not mean there was an official partnership.NaruHina ^Talk 20:09, May 28, 2011 (UTC)
     • Agreed.
2. Axinal
   • Since the Ep. III Incredible Cross-Sections includes the juggernaut and Grievous's wheel bike, it might be good to clarify in the BTS that the ICS is not exclusive to ships.
     • Added.
   • I gave the article a minor copy-edit, very nice overall.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 23:58, June 2, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thank you. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:49, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
3. Imperators II
   • Doesn't Category:Resistance fighters apply here? Imperators II^(Talk) 00:47, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 07:32, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
   • Publishing years of the works should be added in the BTS section. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:38, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added. Not sure if that is neccessary. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:43, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
4. One last thing. Would it be possible to specify the artist that drew Vant? If so, he/she should be mentioned in the BTS. NaruHina ^Talk 19:42, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
   • No that would result in speculation. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:12, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • So the art is not directly attributed? In that case, say that it was either Hans Jenssen or Richard Chasemore. They illustrated the whole book. NaruHina ^Talk 23:39, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
       • Left a note about that in the BtS. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:26, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
         • Thanks. Remember to add this to other articles dealing with the CS books. NaruHina ^Talk 01:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
5. Bob
   • "Senin Vant was a black-eyed Utai male..." Any reason to put his black eyes here? I mean, are there also red-eyed and blue-eyed Utai and it's necessary to distinguish this early in the article? If not, I'd recommend removing "black-eyed" and simply stating at some other point that "He had black eyes." ~Savage 05:13, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
     • No that was simply because I had to mention the fact (Infobox-exclusive). Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:26, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi
   • I would mention that Grievous is a cyborg, as more context on him.
     • Added some, but more would be too much.
   • From the picture don't you think that you could determine his skin color? I would call it a tan color.
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
       • By the way, you should link colors to the color page rather than to a disambiguation page named after that color. I fixed it this time.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
   • I would also mention the color of the markings on his fighter.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:50, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
   • Oh and you could mention his flight gear.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:52, June 9, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:55, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

1. Has anyone an English version of the Complete Cross Sections to check? In the German version, his name is Senim Vant. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:01, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
   • I do. His name is spelled with an "n" there. Bonslywizard ^{(Send a transmission)} 21:59, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thanks. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:23, May 30, 2011 (UTC)