- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Sajar Ohmo
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:41, June 8, 2017 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Now that the spoiler period is over time for some philosophical nonsense.
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Imperators II(Talk) 12:46, June 8, 2017 (UTC)- Cevan
(talk) 19:04, June 12, 2017 (UTC) - Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 15:36, June 19, 2017 (UTC) - Fair enough. ProfessorTofty (talk) 15:42, June 21, 2017 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 03:19, July 31, 2017 (UTC)
Object
As vague as it all is, do you think maybe something of what he said should be mentioned within the article body itself? Perhaps something like "he spoke of the darkness and the light"?ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:27, June 20, 2017 (UTC)- I really don't feel that would add anything to the article, we have literally no idea what the context for the quote is, for all we know it could be a metaphor and not be about the light and the dark at all in any meaningful capacity. Since the quote is right there I feel it's better to just leave it upto the reader to interpret. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:13, June 21, 2017 (UTC)
The first and only sentence in the intro gets confusing due to its length. There's no need to force all that information into one sentence. Just mention them being a member in the first sentence and then being quoted in another.1358 (Talk) 22:04, July 30, 2017 (UTC)- Split. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:46, July 30, 2017 (UTC)