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Sag Kemper
- Nominated by:ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:50, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Created this page before I had an account. Thank to SilverSunbird for expanding the article.
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Imperators II(Talk) 07:23, 7 April 2022 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 07:46, 7 April 2022 (UTC) - —spookywillowwtalk 23:31, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- — Samonic
08:50, 8 April 2022 (UTC) 
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:55, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
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Since this article is about a location, I'd like to see it being noted where did the handoff of the tapestry take place and where was the line about Sag Kemper delivered. Were the two events roughly coincident in time and setting?Imperators II(Talk) 08:38, 25 March 2022 (UTC)- All that is known about the handoff of the tapestry is that it was a gift from the Republic for the Jedi's assistance during the Great Disaster. (Thereforce it must have taken place in either 230 BBY or 231 BBY, which I will note). The line about Sag Kemper was in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, which I will update.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:46, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
- Is there really evidence in the novel supporting the statement that the two events occurred within the same year? If there isn't, you probably should simply say that the second event happened "subsequently". Also, I noticed you removed the mention of Cantaros - was that intentional? If it was, the comma between the mentions of Vitus and Rwoh should probably become "and" instead. Imperators II(Talk) 20:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry, they are not in the same year. I also changed that since the handing off didn't take place in the novel, it is just mentioned it must be in either 232 BBY or 231 BBY.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 03:43, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- The change was intentional, as in Out of the Shadows Imri walks away and Vitus and Rowh enter the temple without him.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 03:43, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Is there really evidence in the novel supporting the statement that the two events occurred within the same year? If there isn't, you probably should simply say that the second event happened "subsequently". Also, I noticed you removed the mention of Cantaros - was that intentional? If it was, the comma between the mentions of Vitus and Rwoh should probably become "and" instead. Imperators II(Talk) 20:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- All that is known about the handoff of the tapestry is that it was a gift from the Republic for the Jedi's assistance during the Great Disaster. (Thereforce it must have taken place in either 230 BBY or 231 BBY, which I will note). The line about Sag Kemper was in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, which I will update.ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:46, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Brief context for Coruscant (that it was a planet - I'm assuming the novel supports that) needed.Imperators II(Talk) 20:04, 27 March 2022 (UTC)- ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:37, 6 April 2022 (UTC) Done
Comments
- For the future, please note that it is preferred that you only nominate articles that you yourself fully wrote. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:59, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:55, 9 April 2022 (UTC)