Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ronto Wrap

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Ronto Wrap

• Nominated by: MasterFred^(Whatever) 06:41, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: These things are freaking delicious and I have eaten an ungodly number of them.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 03:37, July 17, 2019 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:08, July 21, 2019 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
4. Zed42 (talk) 04:51, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Is there enough of a difference in the Ronto Morning Wrap to warrant its own article? Fan26 (Talk) 12:53, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Oops, just noticed the BtS description. Since that's the OOU difference, I'm guessing that doesn't translate to an IU difference? Fan26 (Talk) 13:02, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
    • I had discussed it with Tope, and since there are only a couple differences, we figured it was basically the same dish and didn’t warrant a separate article. MasterFred^(Whatever) 17:52, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
      • Makes sense. Fan26 (Talk) 21:20, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
• I think since 8D-J8 also describes it as 'juicy', that could be mentioned in the article as well. Fan26 (Talk) 21:29, July 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Indeed they are juicy. haha MasterFred^(Whatever) 23:14, July 16, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

• The bit about human consumption is infobox-exclusive. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:55, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
• Quadrant links to a Legends article. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 10:43, July 20, 2019 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I actually think the morning wrap does deserve its own article. Even if the list of ingredients is OOU I think the fact that they contain different things is IU, plus they have distinct IU names. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:10, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
  • It actually appears there already is one, so I removed the morning wrap menu description from this page, as it should go there instead. MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:14, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Zed

• From my experience, there's a precedent of providing the full release date for things that first appeared in comic issues, rather than just specifying the year. Zed42 (talk) 21:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. MasterFred^(Whatever) 02:06, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Imp

• Can you mention the other ingredients of the dish that are visible in the image?
  • Done as carefully as possible so as not to assume coleslaw is canon. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)
• The article states 8D-J8 offered several wraps while the quote implies the droid offered but one. Which is it? Imperators II^(Talk) 14:42, July 29, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. MasterFred^(Whatever) 01:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)
• Say it with me: "231 words." Imperators II^(Talk) 10:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC)
  • The Bts is five words away from being the majority of the text in the article. I've went ahead and added an intro and sectioned the article, but I don't think it makes it any better. If anything, it just breaks the article up unnecessarily, causing the reader to have to scroll to get to info that was previously contained in one paragraph. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:21, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

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