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Rolend Zavros
- Nominated by: Cade
Calrayn 17:26, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A bit of continuity confusion and weirdness for this fine Wednesday morning on my return to the CAN.
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Support
- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 22:02, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:52, 2 January 2022 (UTC)- VergenceScatter (talk) 04:17, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 07:03, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
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Erebus
Not sure if there's a precedent for it, I've never seen one, but I don't think the BTS should mention how both Rolend and Yanila were both mentioned in conversations and just how Rolend was since it's relevant to him, when Yanila's mentions should be documented on her page.- Tweaked.
Page should mention that Coruscant was the capital world.- Already does, at the end of the first paragraph.
- I meant that "world" just needed to be added, but I see it's mentioned as a planet later. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 16:37, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
- Already does, at the end of the first paragraph.
Second paragraph has no full-stops until the end.Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:42, 6 December 2021 (UTC)- Changed.
Please link to Reproduction/Legends.Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:49, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Imp
I'd think it's worth noting in the body that Zavros did not really remember her parents.Can you add in the body to whom is Zavros revealing the above information in that conversation?Imperators II(Talk) 19:21, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
Why do we need two sources for Ashara's age?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:23, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:07, 2 January 2022 (UTC)