Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rkok clan

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Rkok clan

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~~Context for Great Pit of Carkoon.— Samonic 12:04, 23 April 2022 (UTC)~~
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:59, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

~~No quote that directlty describes the Rkok?~~ Fan26 (Talk) 22:07, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- Changed quote. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:07, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

~~Can we add Jawa clan to the infobox type? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)~~
~~Can we get a timeline estimate? From the article it would have occurred prior to 4 ABY (given Jabba's death)? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)~~
~~Context for Dune Sea (ie it was a desert) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)~~
Can you incorporate "They utilised a sandcrawler" into one of the other sentences or elsewhere in the article, the extremely short sentence interrupts the reading flow of the paragraph. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
~~Based on the quote, we need to make note of Jabba's reaction that he was angry and desired retribution or something to that effect Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)~~
~~Need to also note that Hoole wrote/said something about the situation and the context in which it was said. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2022 (UTC)~~
- All documented. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:33, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  - Note that I leave the 4 ABY date out of the infobox, since it's not obvious the whole clan was using that sandcrawler, or if all the clan members were even present for that event. With Jabba's death, the source in question says he was killed in the Battle of Carkoon, and dates it to 4 ABY, so no separate citation needed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:56, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:45, 6 May 2022 (UTC)