Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ribeiro

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Ribeiro

Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 17:47, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 23:46, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 209 words (0 introduction, 160 body, 49 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 211 words (0 introduction, 158 body, 53 behind the scenes)
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There's inconsistent reffing between the body and infobox regarding the pronoun and being affiliated with Yellow Squadron (and the Alliance). Seems like just changing the infobox ref to the short story would fix this Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
~~Yellow Leader should be made and linked~~ Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
~~Missing a relevant gender category~~ Lewisr (talk) 21:33, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
- All addressed Panther436 (talk) 22:52, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
~~I think you should find a way to include that she kept a cool voice when she ordered Malena to accompany her to screen the Death Star's entrance~~ Lewisr (talk) 23:47, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
- DonePanther436 (talk) 00:30, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

This is really the most minor thing, but I feel like using instructed twice to back gets just barely repetitive. It'd be great if you could sneak in a synonym; would've copy-edited it but figured you could choose one you prefer.—spookywilloww^talk 02:09, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
- Changed first one to ordered Panther436 (talk) 22:02, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:45, 24 March 2024 (UTC)