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Red Honeycomb Zone
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Imp
- Hello, and welcome to the CAN!
- A heads-up: articles on subjects that actually appear in Star Wars sources, as opposed to just being mentioned in them, tend to be longer than the 250-word limit of the Comprehensive article tier. Red Honeycomb Zone in particular, appearing multiple times in a theatrical film plus in several comic issues, will almost definitely be over that. So be prepared for the strong possibility that this nomination will fail and the article will have to be taken to the GAN or FAN, instead.
- That being said, let me leave some preliminary objections here:
- Have you checked all applicable sources that are related to/adapt the events of TROS? Does the TROS Visual Dictionary not mention this subject?
- It appears to me that you have to add much more information from the listed sources to this article. For example, I'm seeing information on Vader encountering the creature in the Red Honeycomb Zone, which you make no mention of. Go through all the listed sources and comb them for anything related to this subject.
- You'll have to go through the article and add clarifying context for several concepts: who was Darth Vader? who was Rey? who was Darth Sidious?
- You also have to link everything comprehensively. Link to sexes, thief, fire, and the name of the film in the BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 13:20, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
- Hey Imperators, thanks for your welcome. I've implemented most if not all of your feedback, and you were absolutely right in saying that the article would surpass the 250-word limit. I'm guessing I should probably retract the nomination, somehow? Do you think it's ready to be nominated for GA with my new additions?FNines (talk) 07:20, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
- The Skywalker Legacy details how the Zone was created. This needs to go into the BTS. UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:55, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
- You should include which time frames Vader and Ren went to Exegol in (i.e. the Imperial Era and the First Order/Resistance war). This will push you over the 165 intro word count and possibly into GA eligibility.
- Context for where Rey stole the TIE whisper.
- You should explain that Rey's coordinates were transmitted from Red Five and where she was transmitting them to.
Erebus Chronus (talk)
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- So I've implemented a lot of the feedback left here (thank you all for your advice - I'm scrubbing through The Skywalker Legacy, still trying to find the bit where they talk about the Zone as Shayanomer suggested, so I've put a placeholder line there for now) and, as Imperators II predicted, the word count has now far exceeded the parameters for a Comprehensive Article. Any further feedback would be much appreciated (have I put in too much contextual information that doesn't really relate to the Zone itself? and, if you think it's ready or close to, how would I go about changing the nomination from a Comprehensive to a Good Article? FNines (talk) 03:45, 8 April 2021 (UTC)