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Rebellion on Umbara
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:39, 26 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: two words away from limit!
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AmazinglyCool
- In the infobox, 19 BBY/18 BBY makes it seems like the years are one in the same. Replace the "/" with an ndash = – instead. AmazinglyCool
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- I feel like that would imply it lasted that long. Like the Clone Wars saying it is 22 BBY-19 BBY. So, how was the edit I did instead? -- Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:49, 26 April 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
- If the conflict took place "between 19 BBY to 18 BBY," then say "at some point between 19 BBY to 18 BBY" in the body instead of "around," which isn't grammatically sound when stating a period of time. See Battle on Nevarro.
- In a single section, you discuss events that happened before, during, and after the conflict. Let's see "Prelude" and "Aftermath" sections. UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:27, 26 April 2021 (UTC)
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alright, I am going to need to ask this be taken down. This will go over 250 words--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:06, 26 April 2021 (UTC)