Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Razik

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Razik

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 03:41, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Some Sith names are downright stupid. Others, like Umbriss and Razik, are semi-cool.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. As long as EJ's objections are dealt with. 501st dogma(talk) 14:22, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:03, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:38, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 199. Sneaky. Menkooroo (talk) 04:29, September 9, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • Shouldn't it be around 3642 BBY?
      • At the recommendation of several others on the GAN and FAN pages, I've just been going with in 3642 BBY until we learn otherwise.
    • Double stripe?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:54, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • We have an article on a haircut? o_O Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 14:39, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Ohoho no you don't, this one makes an appearance
    • Context on the battle of Balmorra and Cold War.
      • Cold War? No Cold War. Not much more context I could give on the battle, but I tried.
        • You can at least explain the battle's fate. Winterz (talk) 00:05, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
    • Powers, abilities? C'mon you actually fought him.
      • Didn't show any. No lightning, no nothing. Just lightsaber.
    • Doesn't he speak at all? If so, add whatever he said. Winterz (talk) 21:55, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • No lines. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 23:42, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Unnnghhh
    • Some more context is needed on a few things, including the battle itself, as Winterz said. Of what war is it a part; what do the Sith have to do with the Balmorran resistance?
      • Done.
    • Also the fight. It's currently glazed over, but the leading quote and the BTS indicate that there's more to be said: Him entering the lab; him attempting to stop the hero. Menkooroo (talk) 00:37, August 26, 2012 (UTC)
      • Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 20:42, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
    • Looks like his death is exclusive to the infobox. Stick that into the body! Also probably worth noting if the soldiers die too. Menkooroo (talk) 08:22, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
      • Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 16:07, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
        • Now 202 words! Menkooroo (talk) 07:09, September 1, 2012 (UTC)
          • Not anymore. Some anon keeps shifting the species and gender around in different articles, so the "Human male" got duplicated in a pair of consecutive sentences. Now it's 199. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:57, September 1, 2012 (UTC)

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