Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rathtar/Legends

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Rathtar/Legends

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 06:25, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:01, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:48, January 9, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Zed42 (talk) 21:46, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
  4. —spookywillowwtalk 02:11, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
  5. --Lewisr (talk) 02:23, January 11, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Always nice to see something from TOR nommed. Fan26 (Talk) 15:40, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • The article should be rewritten to be from rathtars' and Gethul's perspective rather than that of the Commander and the investigations. Imperators II(Talk) 11:06, January 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • "rathtar genetic markers [...] were found by Doctor Juvard Illip Oggurobb on the Gethul" — "on" seems a rather odd choice of preposition here. Imperators II(Talk) 13:57, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • Chnaged to were found by Doctor Juvard Illip Oggurobb inside the Gethul--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Our article on Gethul does not use the definite article with the creature's name. Can you please confirm that the article is used in the game? Imperators II(Talk) 13:57, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • I feel like the date ref could use some more work. Specifically, this sentence bothers me: "Since the mission were the Gethul was killed takes place shortly after the end of Knights of the Eternal Throne, [...]". The ref note is saying that Gethul's death occurs after the events of KOTET, which conflicts with the game being listed as the subject's sole source. Can you revise? Also, it'd be wise to move the bulk of the ref note to a date citation template so that it can be easily reused on other KOTFE/KOTET articles without having to copy/paste all that information. Imperators II(Talk) 13:57, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
    • The Defend the Throne update is set after the KOTET storyline, but the update belongs to the expansion per this CT. I think someone is working on an update for our {{TOR updates}} template, but is definetly something we are going to start working on, since several missions and battles are being misplaced.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)
      • Please make sure you follow the progress of work on that template, then. Imperators II(Talk) 10:01, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:38, January 14, 2020 (UTC)