Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ralia Lok

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Ralia Lok

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Impressive word count. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:05, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

~~The fact that she hopes for the war to end is quote-exclusive info.~~
- I'm of the opinion that not all of those details are necessary, but done.
  - Well, I guess it is up to you, I think it should be included in the body but feel free to remove it. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:08, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
~~How come do you link five? I don't believe you should link it since the five years aren't only 3631 BBY.~~
- Because it's the other end of the known span.
  - I'm not convinced, but I see your point here. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:08, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
~~Mand'alor links to the Canon page.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:55, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cade Calrayn 02:23, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
~~Article body is now at 177, if you remove the last sentence it's still at 165.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:08, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
- Added an intro, now at 247. Cade Calrayn 03:35, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
I think you could implement an image in the body. Perhaps of Clan Lock or of Mandalore the Vindicated. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:48, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

I had a quick look and looks like you'll need to potentially create a disambig page for "Lok" and swap out the youmay template for otheruses. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:43, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
Need to mention that Mand'alor was her brother. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:43, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Would like to see the intro expanded beyond a single sentence when you have two paragraphs in the body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:35, 26 November 2021 (UTC)