Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/RS-2112 (second nomination)

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RS-2112

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 15:29, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Second nomination, first was too early

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:19, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:54, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 14:15, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
4. Nice work here OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:03, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:25, 11 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Species is infobox-exclusive.
• Can no date be added to the article? UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:35, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Both fixed--Liverpool92 15:40, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
    • You also need to establish this. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:42, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I add the reasoning. Did you need me to fix something in Unidentified Zeltron?--Liverpool92 16:07, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
        • I'm only objecting to this nomination right now. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:13, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
          • Oh ok thanks got a little confused for a second:P--Liverpool92 16:15, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• Is it necessary to source Dok-Ondar's name to a prior issue of the comic?
  • Removed. Originally added because it isn't stated in Galaxy's Edge 5 that he is the owner.--Liverpool92 21:52, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
• I am unable to see the relevance of the last two sentences since they do not mention the character at all. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:57, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Removed.--Liverpool92 21:50, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Per WP:MOS#Gender, do not refer to individuals of unspecified gender as "they." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:19, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed.--Liverpool92 16:24, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
• You can add a paragraph break. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:06, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Added.--Liverpool92 11:29, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• "Star Wars Character Encyclopedia: Updated and Expanded establishes that all First Order stormtroopers were humans." Should also mention that RS-2112 in Galaxy's Edge 5 was a First Order stormtrooper.
  • Sorry to interject but this is not really necessary, see RJ-909 and FN-1971. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:48, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I suppose that makes sense, given that the only source in which the character appears shows them as a FO stormtrooper. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 19:59, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
• "The stormtrooper complied" Could do with expanding this part with the article's lead quote, especially the fact that RS-2112 said "with pleasure," which is a pretty significant indicator of the trooper's personality.
• I think you can briefly mention the trooper's appearance, i.e. the fact that they're wearing standard stormtrooper armour. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 17:39, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Both fixed.--Liverpool92 21:52, 10 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:25, 11 May 2021 (UTC)