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R-K77
- Nominated by: grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 17:26, January 2, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:12, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 23:26, January 5, 2019 (UTC)- --Lewisr (talk) 23:31, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
- Tommy
Macaroni 16:24, January 6, 2019 (UTC) - QuiGonJinn (Talk) 19:12, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)
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Tommy
Please list Aftermath: Empire's End (audiobook) in the appearances, and could you get the audio file for the quote?Tommy Macaroni 19:27, January 2, 2019 (UTC)
- Appearance added. Unfortunately I have no means to get an audio file from the audio book for the quote, since it is no longer sold anywhere in Australia, and Audible and iTunes don't make it available in Australia either. I can ask around in case anyone does have access to the audiobook though. Thanks for the review! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
- Ah that sucks. I should be able to get it uploaded for you tomorrow. Tommy Macaroni 20:00, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
- Took care of that for you ;) Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:03, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Anil. Tommy Macaroni 14:41, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for handling that, Anil! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:05, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Anil. Tommy
- Took care of that for you ;)
- Ah that sucks. I should be able to get it uploaded for you tomorrow. Tommy
- Appearance added. Unfortunately I have no means to get an audio file from the audio book for the quote, since it is no longer sold anywhere in Australia, and Audible and iTunes don't make it available in Australia either. I can ask around in case anyone does have access to the audiobook though. Thanks for the review! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
Can Star Wars: Galactic Atlas really be used to directly date the events of Aftermath: Empire's End? The article for the Attack on Chandrila seems to have a manual reference note for that. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:14, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
- I've tweaked the ref to explain that the Atlas dates the events of the Battle of Jakku which are the focus of the novel to 5 ABY. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
I think you should pipelink "Princess" in the quote, just like "Alderaan sector." Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 07:17, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
- Done. Thanks for the review! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)
Two final nitpicks. I believe there should be a the before "New Republic" in the very first sentence. Also, there shouldn't be a the before Star Wars: Galactic Atlas in the last reference note. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:03, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- I removed the "the" before Star Wars: Galactic Atlas in the ref, however, I personally prefer to not include a "the" before New Republic, as I think it reads better with "New Republic Chancellor" as just the more descriptive title for Mon Mothma, which then wouldn't require a "the." Let me know what you think. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:05, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, you are probably right. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:12, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, you are probably right.
- I removed the "the" before Star Wars: Galactic Atlas in the ref, however, I personally prefer to not include a "the" before New Republic, as I think it reads better with "New Republic Chancellor" as just the more descriptive title for Mon Mothma, which then wouldn't require a "the." Let me know what you think. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 15:05, January 4, 2019 (UTC)
Imp
Do we have/need an article for Mon Mothma's Chandrila office?Imperators II(Talk) 12:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)- I considered it, but in my opinion it wasn't really notable enough. The office is not described at all, and we only know of a small meeting that took place there, and then later in the book she similarly has an office on Nakadia when the senate moves there. It didn't seem worth its own article, and seemed more appropriate to just mention Mon Mothma had an office on Chandrila while the senate was stationed there in either the Chandrila or the New Republic senate articles. But, I can create one if people feel it might be notable enough of a location. What do you think? Thanks for the review! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:08, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
- Nah, don't create it for me. ;) Imperators II(Talk) 23:26, January 5, 2019 (UTC)
- I considered it, but in my opinion it wasn't really notable enough. The office is not described at all, and we only know of a small meeting that took place there, and then later in the book she similarly has an office on Nakadia when the senate moves there. It didn't seem worth its own article, and seemed more appropriate to just mention Mon Mothma had an office on Chandrila while the senate was stationed there in either the Chandrila or the New Republic senate articles. But, I can create one if people feel it might be notable enough of a location. What do you think? Thanks for the review! grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:08, January 5, 2019 (UTC)