Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Puriv's family

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Puriv's family

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 19:15, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: "Puriv" – part two
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 13:10, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:15, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
3. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:18, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 20:26, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:12, 1 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• The current wording in the last sentence is a little confusing. Could you please rewrite it for better clarity? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 20:29, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Cleaned up. Samonic ^(Talk) 04:05, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• The article needs to make it clear that Puriv was a Stromma and give context for the Stromma contingent Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:55, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
  • The first is done. The second bit, though, I feel like it has enough context. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:15, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
    • I've added a new sentence to include what I was looking for Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:12, 1 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:12, 1 November 2022 (UTC)