Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Proslis

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Proslis

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:52, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Samonic ^(Talk) 21:45, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
2. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:51, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:20, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 22:14, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
5. AxMech (talk) 00:03, 10 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• The quote attribution needs to specify who Thrawn is speaking to. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:27, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:15, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
• Why doesn't the body say Qilori served Proslis? Samonic ^(Talk) 10:07, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Resolved via Discord. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:58, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
• The new core name formatting should be applied to this article.
• The (First mentioned, simultaneous with X) should only be used next to the novel. A {{Mo}} should be used next to the audiobook. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:11, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:47, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• Any chance we know why Proslis' diplomatic ship traveled to Primea? (I'm assuming we don't know whether Proslis themselves went?) Imperators II^(Talk) 15:55, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
  • nope BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:15, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

AxMech

• "[Thrawn and Thalias]...required passage to the Vak Combine nation's capital planet Primea, undetected and under false identities. They were able to arrange passage with..." this section reads kinda poorly? I'd suggest you change it to something like "...required passage to the Vak Combine nation's capital planet Primea while remaining undetected. As such they assumed false identities and were able to arrange passage with..."AxMech (talk) 22:30, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
  • i think it reads well enough. I don't see why it needs to be wordier tbh. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:53, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Tbh I don't really mind anyway, it just felt better that way. If you think it's good, nvmAxMech (talk) 23:59, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:23, 10 December 2022 (UTC)