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Prishti bulb
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:20, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
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- Samonic
07:36, 26 August 2022 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:18, 7 September 2022 (UTC)- Loqiical (talk) 07:44, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 14:21, 12 September 2022 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 20:31, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
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"played a keen prishti bulb" This needs to sound a little more formal.Fan26 (Talk) 02:20, 4 September 2022 (UTC)- Rewritten. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
- That's even more awkwardly written and still is informal. My advice is not to focus so much on paraprhasing what the source text literally says and more try to translate its meaning. Fan26 (Talk) 23:12, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
- Reworded to sharp prishti bulb. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:15, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
- Honestly, I'd say to just make it "played the prishti bulb well". That's as close to encycopedic as we can get while still retaining the meaning of the source text. Fan26 (Talk) 00:57, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:59, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
- Honestly, I'd say to just make it "played the prishti bulb well". That's as close to encycopedic as we can get while still retaining the meaning of the source text. Fan26 (Talk) 00:57, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
- Reworded to sharp prishti bulb. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:15, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
- That's even more awkwardly written and still is informal. My advice is not to focus so much on paraprhasing what the source text literally says and more try to translate its meaning. Fan26 (Talk) 23:12, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
- Rewritten. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:32, 15 September 2022 (UTC)