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Plexgrove Combine
- Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his)
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- Fan26 (Talk) 22:49, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 14:11, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:01, 25 December 2022 (UTC)- - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:04, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- OOM 224 20:36, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
Object
Fan
The second sentence refers to the Combine with both "they" and "it"; it should be consistent with one or the other.Fan26 (Talk) 05:50, 15 December 2022 (UTC)- Removed the "they" since it's a non-individual entity. Manoof (he/him/his) 14:18, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- Removed the "they" since it's a non-individual entity. Manoof (he/him/his)
OOM
It's usually not necessary to mention "the galaxy" because virtually everything SW takes place there. Unless the source here specifies that Plexgrove Combine's operations were galaxy-wide or something?OOM 224 22:57, 17 December 2022 (UTC)- "Plexgrove is a financing and banking interest providing mid- and low-level banking services in many regions of the galaxy" Manoof (he/him/his) 10:01, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
- Hmm okay. Maybe it'd be better to specify that in the article then? "Throughout the galaxy," perhaps? OOM 224 20:33, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done Manoof (he/him/his) 04:18, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done Manoof (he/him/his)
- Hmm okay. Maybe it'd be better to specify that in the article then? "Throughout the galaxy," perhaps? OOM 224 20:33, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- "Plexgrove is a financing and banking interest providing mid- and low-level banking services in many regions of the galaxy" Manoof (he/him/his)
Macaroni
The page for Han Solo and the Corporate Sector Sourcebook says its release was in 1993 - and since this wasn't the author's only 1993 sourcebook, the parenthetical commas are misleading and should be removed.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:20, 18 December 2022 (UTC)- I think I understand, updated Manoof (he/him/his) 10:01, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
- I think I understand, updated Manoof (he/him/his)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:36, 30 December 2022 (UTC)