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Parwan Nutricake
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(talk) 19:27, 30 April 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Back to things that look delicious! For WookieeProject Galaxy's Edge. Note that despite the cookbook including them in the Felucian Garden Spread recipe, they aren't in the theme park version.
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- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:34, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 10:28, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 10:54, 16 May 2021 (UTC)- Dip into electrolytic serum for added flavor. DwartiiDelver (talk) 17:15, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:49, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 08:04, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
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Macaroni Cakes
If we're not going to assume that he sold the cakes at Tuggs' Grub, it should be removed from the infobox.- (FYI, Macaroni and I have discussed this privately, and now the WP:GE channel has as well!) Precedent is to list the cookbook recipes as Tuggs' Grub affiliated and the discussions seem to agree with that take on the introduction which says his recipes are from his menu. However, I'm avoiding saying this one is sold on Batuu specifically since it isn't at the parks. Does that work for you? (Also, I just updated the link to go to his restaurant instead of his ship.) Immi Thrax (talk) 22:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
Batuu is listed as one of the locations in the infobox—is that intentional?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:48, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- ... that's a whoopsies-pretend-you-didn't-see-that leftover from before I took it on that became invisible to me over time. Batuu? Never heard of her. Immi Thrax (talk) 23:19, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- ... that's a whoopsies-pretend-you-didn't-see-that leftover from before I took it on that became invisible to me over time. Batuu? Never heard of her. Immi Thrax
- (FYI, Macaroni and I have discussed this privately, and now the WP:GE channel has as well!) Precedent is to list the cookbook recipes as Tuggs' Grub affiliated and the discussions seem to agree with that take on the introduction which says his recipes are from his menu. However, I'm avoiding saying this one is sold on Batuu specifically since it isn't at the parks. Does that work for you? (Also, I just updated the link to go to his restaurant instead of his ship.) Immi Thrax
The Bts can mention that the recipe is OOU.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:14, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Done! Immi Thrax (talk) 22:43, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- Done! Immi Thrax
UberSoldat
"Prior to its destruction[1] in 34 ABY,[3] Artiodac chef Strono Tuggs worked for Maz Kanata at her castle on Takodana." Currently this sentence implies the destruction of Tuggs and not the castle.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:10, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
- Bad implication fixed! Immi Thrax (talk) 20:58, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
- Bad implication fixed! Immi Thrax
It appears there is a missing 1st appearance and mention in Legends to be documented in the BTS. The article in its current state does not make this clear.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:11, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
- Is it more clear now? I'm having to assume the Legends article is correct. Immi Thrax (talk) 20:58, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
- In that case, you need to investigate those sources and verify whether or not those templates are correct. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:23, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, I've investigated as far as I can into the two things listed on the Legends article--the story with Max Rebo, the SWG text and image for the cake--but I can't verify that these are indeed the first mention and appearance, or even the only two, as it's possible prior editors missed some. So addressing the previous objection (about not being clear about a 1st appearance) may have created a new problem of having to assert something I can't actually verify. Could the BTS be revised to not specify these as firsts? Immi Thrax (talk) 09:11, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- No need. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:15, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- No need. UberSoldat93
- Yes, I've investigated as far as I can into the two things listed on the Legends article--the story with Max Rebo, the SWG text and image for the cake--but I can't verify that these are indeed the first mention and appearance, or even the only two, as it's possible prior editors missed some. So addressing the previous objection (about not being clear about a 1st appearance) may have created a new problem of having to assert something I can't actually verify. Could the BTS be revised to not specify these as firsts? Immi Thrax
- In that case, you need to investigate those sources and verify whether or not those templates are correct. UberSoldat93
- Is it more clear now? I'm having to assume the Legends article is correct. Immi Thrax
Context for Maz Kanata.I'm unable to see the relevance of specifying that Tuggs worked at Takodana; currently the statement has no relation to this subject.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:20, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- How's the latest edit for Maz and Takodana? Immi Thrax (talk) 09:54, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
- How's the latest edit for Maz and Takodana? Immi Thrax
Imp
Is that an infobox-exclusive description I'm seeing? :PImperators II(Talk) 19:39, 16 May 2021 (UTC)- ... No? >_> (not any more) Immi Thrax (talk) 01:46, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
- ... No? >_> (not any more) Immi Thrax
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:04, 17 May 2021 (UTC)