Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Otavon XII's second moon

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Otavon XII's second moon

  • Nominated by: NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:37, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Arbitrary numbering is arbitrary.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Nice.—Axinal Convocation Chamber 00:22, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Imperators II(Talk) 21:20, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Over the moon. ~SavageBOB sig 05:38, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OLIOSTER (talk) 23:54, May 18, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Much better after that last change.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:29, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. I find the first sentence a bit lengthy. Do you think you could split it into two just for ease of reading, or maybe replace a couple of commas with emdashes?—Axinal Convocation Chamber 21:44, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • I subbed in Jon's version. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 00:00, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
  1. ExiledJedi
    • The first sentence made it sound like the moon orbited two planets, please reword.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:17, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

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