Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Old Market (Lothal)

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Old Market (Lothal)

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 17:27, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 23:39, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 127 words (0 introduction, 98 body, 29 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 83 words (0 introduction, 64 body, 19 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Rebels

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Support

1. CometSmudge (talk) 18:43, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
2. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 22:34, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 00:55, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
4. Sanathestarr (talk) 21:06, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
5. Lewisr (talk) 23:34, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

Dani

• I think the fact that Old Market was a backup should be mentioned. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 17:44, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Mentioned. Wok142 (talk) 21:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
• Do you know if this scene is in Star Wars Rebels, Vol. 1? NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 17:44, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • The page for this says this only adapts the first two episodes. If that is true, then most likely no. Wok142 (talk) 21:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
    • That's my bad for misunderstanding the scope of that source. Sorry. But further investigation implies Star Wars Rebels, Vol. 2 covers episode 8. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 10:43, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
      • No problem, I'll ask around to see if anyone can check this for me. Wok142 (talk) 06:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
      • I've checked and no, it does not make an appearance in that. Wok142 (talk) 03:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
• BTS needs clean up (Episode/Season # and sources for such). NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 17:44, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Cleaned it up. Wok142 (talk) 21:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
    • I'd like to see mention of animated televisions for Rebels, similar to seen here Lucky (pet). —Unsigned comment by NBDani (talk • contribs)
      • Does that suffice? Wok142 (talk) 06:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
• Feel free to disagree: I think there may be some value to providing Zeb's and Hera's spectre codenames in prose, to link back to the quote. Hera's is obviously sourceable to the episode but unsure on Zeb's. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 16:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
  • I worked in Hera's since it's in the quote (as you said) but I decided against throwing in Zeb's. Wok142 (talk) 18:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Comet

• I think the Spectres should have a little context CometSmudge (talk) 16:45, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Done. Wok142 (talk) 18:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• Hera's and Zeb's pronouns aren't citable to the episode Lewisr (talk) 01:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Updated references. Wok142 (talk) 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:34, 29 June 2024 (UTC)