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OS-72-10
- Nominated by: Dat1899 (talk) 21:08, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Thank you to User:Hanzo Hasashi
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- Provided nothing else randomly shows his picture. At worst, most likely just pictured only tags if anything at all, though if anything predates Star Wars Trilogy Sourcebook, Special Edition, both behind the scenes and sources tags would need some minor changes. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:39, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
- Nice work, just watch that capitalization ;) I try to preview most changes just in case :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:14, 25 November 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:56, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:49, 7 December 2021 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 08:31, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Does OS-72-10 have his own entry in CSWE?UberSoldat93(talk) 19:54, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
- Confirmed via Discord. UberSoldat93
(talk) 20:22, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
- Confirmed via Discord. UberSoldat93
CC-8
Imperial Navy can be added to the infobox affiliationsCommander Code-8 Hello There! 00:51, 20 November 2021 (UTC)- Done.--Dat1899 (talk) 09:19, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'd say Obsidian Squadron as a second affiliation is better. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:40, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- Added that too.--Dat1899 (talk) 14:34, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
- Didn't even think of it, but for another adjustment per the Layout Guide bullets in infoboxes are restricted to a depth of one, so in this case you'll need to replace Imperial Navy with Obsidian Squadron. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:03, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- Added that too.--Dat1899 (talk) 14:34, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'd say Obsidian Squadron as a second affiliation is better. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:40, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done.--Dat1899 (talk) 15:58, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
- Done.--Dat1899 (talk) 09:19, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
Since Category:Obsidian Squadron members is a subcategory of Category:Imperial Navy pilots of the Galactic Empire, you can remove the parent category :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:10, 24 November 2021 (UTC)Can you note his gender earlier in the article and more explicitly eg "was a male tie fighter pilot"... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:10, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:31, 9 December 2021 (UTC)