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Neapolitan ice cream
- Nominated by: D MCCG
(chat) 05:10, 9 January 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments: My favorite ice cream flavor (I'm Italian, what can I say?)
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JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:57, 13 January 2023 (UTC)- BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 23:37, 13 January 2023 (UTC)
- Samonic
(Talk) 16:51, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 15:45, 15 January 2023 (UTC)- Dentface (talk) 21:15, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
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Ziara
i've been told that we can't actually use Wikipedia as a source. perhaps a dictionary entry would be better (see the BTS of Kleptocracy)BloodOfIrizi(talk) 19:37, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
- Review note: You shouldn't cite anything to Wikipedia. It's a wiki, not a source.
- Fixed.
Missing "notoc." You'll have to add "|notoc=1" to the {{Top}} template.- Done.
You shouldn't link the stormtrooper writer and his training manual in the quote's caption if they're linked in the article's body.- Fixed.
BtS: It's unnecessary to identify vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry as flavors in the end of the BtS when they're identified as such earlier in the sentence they're mentioned. I'd recommend mentioning them earlier in the sentence by doing something like this: "flavors—vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry—…"Samonic
(Talk) 20:05, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:03, 16 January 2023 (UTC)