Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Naval Station Validusia

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Naval Station Validusia

• Nominated by: Loqiical (talk) 09:37, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:29, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 08:31, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
3. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:29, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:01, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• " which orbited a blue planet in the Validusia system. " This is oddly specific-does the source actually describe it as such? Because this is langauge one typically sees when there's an accompaying image. Fan26 (Talk) 17:43, 22 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes, the source says blue. Loqiical (talk) 00:38, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Huh, guess they just ripped it straigh from the Legends image Fan26 (Talk) 04:12, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
• I would just say it was first "depicted" in Warfare. Fan26 (Talk) 04:12, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Used "introduced" in a copy-edit. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:40, 29 January 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Please add the approximate date for the magazine issue's release, this can be found on its page. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:40, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes. Loqiical (talk) 01:50, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Please use {{BMFdates}} as well, and remember, it's an approximation, so the wording should be tweaked (on --> around). UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:09, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Ok Loqiical (talk) 23:49, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• I don't think the shape of the fuel containers is critical information, so I suggest removing them from the infobox.
• In the prose, numbers below the value of 100 should be spelled out in letters. OOM 224 22:26, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Ok. Loqiical (talk) 01:28, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Didn't include the 17km in the infobox because the source uses both "tall" and "long," which is confusing. Also, having a 17km tall spire doesn't prevent the station from also having an even taller one that is simply not mentioned. Loqiical (talk) 09:55, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:01, 4 February 2022 (UTC)