Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mynock leather

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Mynock leather

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Support

  1. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 20:14, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 23:07, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:31, 8 February 2024 (UTC)


Object

Lew
  • 'with the parasitic creatures known as mynocks' This will need to be cited to something other than the story Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The book has Marda describe the leather as 'just as white as my suit' Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I should stop editing while sleep deprived, makes me miss basic stuff like this. Fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 17:12, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The BTS should note it was in a flashback Lewisr (talk) 18:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • {{Substance}} can be filled out due to the type field at least being fillable (along with whatever else applicable).
    • Added, not exactly sure how to word the "uses" field, let me know if I should rephrase it Sanathestarr (talk) 10:27, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Made a slight tweak to it in a copy-edit but yeah that's the gist of it. Just generally since it's a one-off best to assume it could be used to wrap anything, theorhetically.—spookywillowwtalk 20:27, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Probably best to rearrange the Dantooine context of being a planet to sit before the Dantooine link (ie. …the planet Dantooine… because it seems not being contextualized at first look, which is generally avoided. The spot where planet sits can then be changed to 'world's oldest settlement' or something to not use the same word twice.
  • "However, Nagor only wanted to touch Ro, who then offered her a position in Ro's band of pirates. Nagor accepted the offer in exchange for a kiss."—can be cut, isn't relevant to the leather page itself, better suited for Marda's page itself.
  • End of the article body missing punctuation.—spookywillowwtalk 22:14, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Is the information cited to Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know also present in Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded? If so the latter version should be used due to it being a newer edition of the same work.
  • (Review note) Some formatting things/doublelink; something to note is that, given there's a lot of SAs now from the same source, the BtS of all of them would optimally match more or less exactly between them for the part about the short story. I've very lightly tweaked the one here to take out 'that was' and add the comma to make it work correctly grammatically, but this current BtS (which is also used on several of your other noms) should be the one being copied elsewhere for future ones from the same story.—spookywillowwtalk 20:27, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Noted, should there be an "and" in the middle of "...written by Tessa Gratton published in the...," or was it left out intentionally? Sanathestarr (talk) 12:17, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Added back, myb. But mainly pretty much all of these should maintain the format used on Unidentified space dock more or less, with the only variations being for mentioned vs appeared and flashback/indirect mention or anything else, but the rest being the same.—spookywillowwtalk 01:49, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Can you use a different source than that podcast for those two items? It's best to avoid using non–official SW sources when possible.
    • Sorry to interject but I think this is a case where the podcast is actually needed, since it firmly clarifies the status of Marda's group in this story when no other source does. This same objection was recently brought up on synth-smoke and another prior before in the link in that conversation. Lewisr (talk) 03:17, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Can you point me to where the story says its contents are specifically a recorded message? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:01, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
    • There isn't an explicit statement that it's a recorded message, however the story makes it clear it's supposed to be a recording. (I've gotten the opinion of two other ECs on that.) It's also confirmed to be a recording in the podcast interview if you feel like it'd be better to source it to the interview. Sanathestarr (talk) 19:01, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:31, 8 February 2024 (UTC)