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Mos Espa's first cantina
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:10, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Can't wait to see this appear in the Dawn of the Jedi movie
- Date Archived: 16:45, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 102 words (0 introduction, 42 body, 60 behind the scenes)
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Support
- AmazinglyCool
(talk) 19:19, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 22:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:43, 13 April 2023 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:24, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi
(Syndicure) 16:42, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
Object
Amazingly
Would it be worth it to reword the first sentence as "By 32 BBY, a gutted jukebox from the first cantina in the city of Mos Espa on the desert planet Tatooine..."?AmazinglyCool(talk) 19:16, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
- How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:19, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
- Great! AmazinglyCool
(talk) 19:19, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
- Great! AmazinglyCool
- How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:19, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:44, 15 April 2023 (UTC)