Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mon Cala's moon

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Mon Cala's moon

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 07:07, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First nom of 2022
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:22, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:37, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:59, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
4. Loqiical (talk) 07:07, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
5. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:14, 8 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Since Mon Cala only has 1 moon, why can't we say: "The moon of the planet…"
• You should mention the "new Star Wars canon" in the BTS.
• [Category:Rocky moons]?
  • Sorry to interject here, but requesting that a nominator trawl through other articles to determine whether a new category is warranted falls a bit outside the scope of the nomination. If you have the drive for it, I suggest you create the category yourself, Luca. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:27, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Nevermind the above comment, I didn't realize you were merely suggesting the addition of an existing category. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:48, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
      • All good, it seems like you fixed it. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:00, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
• The full release date isn't needed for novels.
  • Isn't the year of release self sourcing? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:55, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
    • True.--Liverpool92 02:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
• Since the sources used in the references don't give the location of the moon, but of the planet, it should be something like: "Ultimate Star Wars — Based on corresponding data for Mon Cala"
  • This applies to the TCW episode as well. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:55, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Whoops forgot--Liverpool92 02:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
• Please, make sure to be ok with this copy-edit. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:46, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
  • All fixed.-Liverpool92 16:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• Please reflect the fact that Dac's Moon was first identified as such in here. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:31, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed.-Liverpool92 16:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Release year, please. And it's self-sourcing for novels. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:47, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
      • Also forgot.--Liverpool92 02:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:13, 8 January 2022 (UTC)