Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Miggs McKane

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Miggs McKane

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:24, April 29, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Continuing the theme of Jakku scavenger nominations after Roodown.

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Cwedin(talk) 22:14, April 29, 2016 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:39, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Good job! Manoof (talk) 11:18, May 1, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 16:15, July 26, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Lewisr (talk) 16:42, August 2, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 19:16, August 8, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • It seems to me McKane had some facial hair. I believe you should add this.
  • Context on Ogem, please. Imperators II(Talk) 18:54, April 29, 2016 (UTC)
    • Ah, I didn't realise it had been given more context elsewhere in canon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:50, April 29, 2016 (UTC)
Manoof
  • The way your referencing is at the moment, the visual dictionary establishes the time that rey wrote the journal. Is this correct? Manoof (talk) 10:08, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
    • The dictionary establishes the timeframe for TFA, the events of which are referenced as happening at the end of the journal therefore the journal was finished at the same time as TFA. I could write a more detailed reference to explain this if you like. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:52, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
      • No I think that's fine. Having not read the journal, I didn't know it ended concurrent with the movie. Manoof (talk) 07:55, May 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • I believe the hair attribute in the infobox can say something about his facial hair. He also has a moustache, not just a beard (apologies if this cuts into imperators' above objection). Manoof (talk) 10:08, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
    • As far as I know the hair section of the infobox is just for color, I've never seen facial hair described there. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:52, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
      • Sounds good. Can you clarify he had a moustache, or just say he had facial hair in the article? Manoof (talk) 07:55, May 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure you can say robes. He is wearing something with a long, loose sleeve, and what could be a vest, but I don't think there is enough detail to say it's a robe, unless the book elaborates. Manoof (talk) 10:08, April 30, 2016 (UTC)
    • Removed the mention of robes. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:52, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

This may be a "sofixit", but link for Order of Battle? It is a Legends crossover. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 16:31, August 2, 2016 (UTC)