Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mass Shadow Generator

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Mass Shadow Generator

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 05:35, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: One of the coolest superweapons reemerges in canon.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Good work with this!—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 18:24, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
   • Thanks!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:36, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:20, March 8, 2018 (UTC)
3. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:04, March 14, 2018 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:47, March 20, 2018 (UTC)

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Mass Shadow Imperators

• We almost never use bare URLs like that. That's what {{WebCite}} is for.
  • Is there another source for the date of Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords? The link for the date in that article leads to a 404 error and has no back up.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:05, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • I used it from the article, I'm going to go find another source and update KOTOR 2 and this article--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:06, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:28, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
    • Addressed below--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:34, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
• Also, in the body you say that Delto stated in the report that the Generator was a tall tale, but from the quote it's apparent he only mentioned the possibility it was a tall tale. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:13, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:05, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
• 211 words by my count. Let's see an intro and some sectioning.
  • Intro and history section made--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:58, March 3, 2018 (UTC)
• You didn't source the Rebel Files release date to the book itself on this nomination. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:54, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Sourced to book--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:52, March 3, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• You don't need the full dates in the BTS. It's unnecessary as just the year is sufficient, and that can be sourced to the product itself.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 16:31, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:34, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
• The ref names don't need to be underscored. Sorry if you got that from me, that was my bad.—Tommy-Macaroni ^{(TAKE A SEAT)} 17:41, March 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:52, March 2, 2018 (UTC)

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