Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lucky (pet)

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Lucky (pet)

• Nominated by: NBDani (talk) 00:58, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 00:59, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
2. Roguish Knight (talk) 19:43, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:11, 12 November 2021 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:20, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:04, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Roguish Knight

• I really want to support this one, but do you think you could add the longer version of the intro quote that used to be there? ("I once had a pet named Lucky that reminded me of home… and then it died… and then I ate it. And it was supremely delicious!" I actually thought that line was pretty funny. In fact, I'm the one who added that bit to the article a while ago.) Also related, Neeku only used "it" pronouns to refer to Lucky in his brief mention ("and then it died", rather than "they died", "he died" or "she died"), so if that's how Lucky's master referred to his pet, maybe the article should say he "thought it was delicious" rather than "thought they were delicious"? - Roguish Knight (talk) 01:59, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I actually asked the Discord about using It pronouns and they agreed but out of habit I somehow still used they. Fixed. As for the longer quote, I initially removed it for 2 reasons, big quotes on small articles bother me so i wanted to shrink it ever so slightly. And 2ndly I was worried the audio file would sound weird if i ended it with Neeku being cut off (and I didn't want to include Kaz interrupting cause of the before reason). But I was able to cut it nicely after delicious (I matched the grammar to D+ subtitles) and it was worth it cause you are right, it was very funny. Neeku's humor must live. NBDani (talk) 09:53, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Infobox death field should mention a date of death instead of before an event.
  • Fixed. But unsure if it meets precedent standards. NBDani (talk) 20:14, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
    • The date note in the body needs to be used in the infobox as well.
      • Thought I had moved it up but it's done now. NBDani (talk) 17:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
• Do we know Neeku's home? If so it should be mentioned what he was reminded of. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:29, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition establishes Neeku and Kaz's home worlds as Hosnian Prime and Kintan respectively. per my comment below I wasn't sure if I should pipelink to them or not as I'm unsure if the characters mean their home planets or the physical homes (which we don't know anything about). I've pipelinked their homeworlds to their own homes now. NBDani (talk) 20:14, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
    • I'd like to see those spelled out instead of just linked. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:02, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
      • I've specified their homes. I know Kazuda has referred to Hosnian Prime as his home (when Starkiller Base destroyed it) But Neeku hasn't really spoken about Kintan. I know USWNE calls it his homeworld but is it possible he grew up elsewhere and sees another world as his home? (Not sure what our policy on what Homeworld implies) NBDani (talk) 17:13, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Looks good to me now.
• A little more context on this trophy of Kaz, please. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:16, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Context added. NBDani (talk) 23:32, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
• Review note: please see WP:MOS#Formatting for linking in the future. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:20, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• The alternate name in the Bts can be bolded Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:01, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • And now it is! Thank you. NBDani (talk) 11:50, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Bolding should only be reserved for the intro, I've changed it to double quotes. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:26, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The spelling of the alternate name is currently inconsistent. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:26, 11 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Apologies for that error, not sure where the r came from. Fixed. NBDani (talk) 16:44, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Hope this is the right place to put this concern. Both Vozo and Xiono talk about their homes. I almost linked their homeplanets but felt it was assuming they meant their home planets and not their actual homes (Which don't have articles). Please let me know if I should still link their home planets. NBDani (talk) 00:58, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:05, 16 November 2021 (UTC)