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Local 253
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:22, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
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Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:19, 19 February 2022 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:45, 23 February 2022 (UTC) - LucaRoR
(Talk) 12:59, 23 February 2022 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 19:13, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
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Fan
If local 253 is a sector, than wouldn't the Tatooine locations category be more appropiate than "Society and Culture"?Fan26 (Talk) 06:32, 29 January 2022 (UTC)- From Discord channel which I had posted when away from computer: technically we don't know if it's on Tatooine. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Do we have enough information to deternine if it's a location at all then? Or should it remain in the "Society and Culture" category? Fan26 (Talk) 19:50, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
- Yes, the local 253 is clearly used to refer to a local branch. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:48, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof and I discussed it over discord, and we feel that there's enough evidence to say it is a location on Tatooine. Fan26 (Talk) 03:29, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:13, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof and I discussed it over discord, and we feel that there's enough evidence to say it is a location on Tatooine. Fan26 (Talk) 03:29, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Yes, the local 253 is clearly used to refer to a local branch. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:48, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
- Do we have enough information to deternine if it's a location at all then? Or should it remain in the "Society and Culture" category? Fan26 (Talk) 19:50, 12 February 2022 (UTC)
- From Discord channel which I had posted when away from computer: technically we don't know if it's on Tatooine. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Luca
"in exchange for the moisture farmers' protection from Tatooine's indigenous Tusken Raider species" It isn't currently clear who protects whom. If it's Jabba that protects them, then I'd rword it to something like: "in exchange for Jabba's protection to the moisture farmers from Tatooine's indigenous Tusken Raider species"LucaRoR (Talk) 16:30, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
- Source material literally only says they "agreed to pay Jabba in exchange for protection from Tusken Raiders. Crell is responsible for collecting and delivering this protection money." Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:59, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
- Reworded. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:17, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
- Source material literally only says they "agreed to pay Jabba in exchange for protection from Tusken Raiders. Crell is responsible for collecting and delivering this protection money." Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:59, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
We shouldn't use Crell's image in the infobox since he isn't the location (it can and probably should still be in the article though). Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 19 February 2022 (UTC)- For the record, I've gone ahead and removed it from the body since there's really no space for it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:12, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
- For the record, I've gone ahead and removed it from the body since there's really no space for it. UberSoldat93
Likewise, Crell being somewhere shouldn't be a mention or appearance and listed in sources/appearances (including the film). We don't list Tatooine for every source that shows Darth Vader for example. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 19 February 2022 (UTC)I think there's some unnecessary information about Crell that can be cut when thinking about "Is this relevant to the location". Pretty much from when Crell was in Jabba's palace Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 19 February 2022 (UTC)The last sentence of the BTS is also unnecessary. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 19 February 2022 (UTC)- Addressed all. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:13, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Are those specific release windows supported by BTM and the CCG set?- Cited to things that verify specific release dates.
If Ardon Crell was a representative of the organization during the events of ROTJ, shouldn't appearances of the character also count as appearances of this subject?UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:12, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
- Per other objections above, local 253 is interpreted as a physical location for a group, thus Ardon Crell's depictions aren't just blanket depictions, though the Moisture Farmers of Tatooine is correctly interpreted as appearing through Crell in everything. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:38, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:36, 26 February 2022 (UTC)