Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lexi Dio (starship)

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Lexi Dio (starship)

Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments:TFU CAN for TFU.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Teff 16:09, June 25, 2011 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Wookieepedia:Sock puppetry -- Imperators II^(Talk) 17:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC))

—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 03:48, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
NaruHina ^Talk 05:04, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
~Savage 14:38, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 17:51, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Object

~~The Force Unleashed II release date is incorrect. Teff 02:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)~~
- Oops. Don't know how I missed that. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
Axinal
- ~~Are there any quotes available from the novel?~~
  - Let me check that. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- ~~The fact that it was an assault bomber during the early days of the Rebellion is currently exclusive to the intro.~~
  - Got it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
    - This might be a little picky, but you say "early days of the Rebellion" in the intro. While you specify 1 BBY in the body, it's not entirely clear to the reader that 1 BBY is in the early days of the Rebellion. Could you throw that in somewhere?—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 22:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
      - How does that look? Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
        Looks good to me. Any luck with a quote, or are there none?—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 10:10, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
        Haven't been able to look yet. I should be able to look for one sometime this week. But I put a request for a quote on the talk page in case someone else found a good quote first. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:11, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
        How's that quote? Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
        Perfect, minus the comma problems, which I fixed assuming they weren't [sic]s.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 01:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
- ~~It is not entirely necessary to source it, as you did for the history section, but it is encouraged. If you do source it, however, you need to source every bulleted item in the infobox.~~
  - OK fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- I added the {{Title}} template for you to italicize the title.
  - OK thanks. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Otherwise, nice article.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 08:19, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
  - Great thanks! Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:51, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
Super tiny thing: Is the date confirmed as 1 BBY? If so, the "approximately" in the body isn't necessary. If not, then could you add a ~ before the two instances of "1 BBY" in the infobox for consistency? Menkooroo 13:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed.Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
Rubedo - ~~Context on what the Empire was attacking at the Itani Nebula.~~ NaruHina ^Talk 23:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:38, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
Hold up for one more thing. What your source for 1 BBY? The main article on TFU2 has a source tag on that in the infobox. Merely citing six months after TFU1 for that would place it in either 2 BBY or 1 BBY. NaruHina ^Talk 05:20, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Actually it's 3 BBY. Look at the reference. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
~~Intro states 1 ABY, body states 1 BBY. Please correct as necessary.~~ - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:57, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry, that was my fault. NaruHina ^Talk 14:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
  - Take a look at my above comment. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
    - Umm, how did you get the 3 BBY date? The inside cover of the TFU II comic states "The events in this story take place approximately twelve months before the Battle of Yavin". This is 1 BBY. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 17:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
      - Yea, sorry about that. I'm currently going through a source hunt with some other users to find a worthy source to use. I think I've found one, though, so as soon as it's approved, I'll change it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:12, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
        The source if from the TFU II comic. It's as worthy as you can get since the battle that involved the ship is in it. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:54, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
        The one I was going to use was the one used here. I'll change them both, though, if the comic would be a better source. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:49, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
        
        The comic is an official LFL product. GamePro magazine isn't. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
        OK changed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:51, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
        It's still saying 3 BBY, sourced to the TFU II comic. Comic states 12 months before Yavin, equaling 1 BBY. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:07, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
        Arrgghh! I hate it when I miss stuff. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:53, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

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