Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lazerian VII

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Lazerian VII

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 07:45, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Good work! Imperators II(Talk) 20:27, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:38, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:41, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:40, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:11, 16 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Region, sector, and grid coordinates are infobox-exclusive. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 19:18, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Added to body. DFaceG (talk) 03:35, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please update the BTS and Appearances according to this.
  • Please remove the Online Companion from Sources because that work only ever mentions the Lazerian system. Imperators II(Talk) 09:13, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Please note in the BTS the author of the chapter on Lazerian IV per the book's table of contents.
  • The Lazerian system was already mentioned in The Essential Atlas, so you should switch that for the Online Companion in the BTS as the original work that introduced the system's coordinates.
  • Per Good article precedent here, we're assuming that any hyperlanes that are connected to a given star system also apply to its constituent planets, therefore you should add to the infobox and body of this article that Lazerian VII, along with the rest of the Lazerian system, was situated on the Harrin Trade Corridor and Kira Run hyperlanes per the map in Twin Stars of Kira.
  • Per The Essential Atlas, the Lazerian system, and therefore Lazerian VII, is specifically located in the Trailing Sectors portion of the Expansion Region. Please add this information to the infobox and the body. See Roldalna for status article precedent on how to do that. (This article is already in the Trailing Sectors planets category because the Kira sector planets one is a subcategory of that one.)
  • I don't see the last sentence of the article as necessary. You've already noted the planet's orbital position (=seventh), and providing an explicit list of all the system's orbital bodies is more of a job for the Lazerian system article. Imperators II(Talk) 19:17, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
    • All of the above addressed. DFaceG (talk) 20:18, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:40, 18 March 2022 (UTC)