Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lama Su Clone Works

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Lama Su Clone Works

• Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 03:06, 28 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CIS, WP:LEGO

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Happy to see The Yoda Chronicles content on the nominations pages! Good job. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:52, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:43, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Just watch your linking with canon/legends articles when editing legends (I do it all the time myself). Also why is there no canon version of Prime Minister (Kamino)? o.0 Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:37, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 05:35, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
5. Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 05:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Missing link to army/Legends. Context for Jek-14.
  • Fixed. DFaceG (talk) 06:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Did the company have a presence in the Petranaki Arena? I don't think that the clone-o-matic being in the arena means the company was there.
  • Fixed. DFaceG (talk) 06:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• I don't see anything in the Yoda Chronicles book specifying that the events of the Yoda Chronicles take place in 21 BBY.
  • The page of the book that talks about Jek-14 should have it listed as his birth date.
    • Yes, it does. That doesn't specify that the series took place in 21 BBY. A date note expansion would be adequate. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:02, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
      • Expanded. DFaceG (talk) 06:58, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
• You should also specify that the clone-o-matic didn't work in 21 BBY or when the Yoda Chronicles took place.
  • Fixed. DFaceG (talk) 06:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
• Does the Menace of the Sith really specify that Lama Su is the Kaminoan Prime Minister? Samonic ^(Talk) 10:55, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. DFaceG (talk) 06:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• Per the MOS, links should not be used in quoted dialogue, attributions are fine tho
  • Fixed. - DFaceG (talk) 07:53, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
• Context needed for Kamino Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:49, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. - DFaceG (talk) 07:53, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
• Information about the founding date isn't really necessary, especially when the article body only has one relevant date. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:21, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. DFaceG (talk) 08:29, 18 October 2022 (UTC)

Erebus

• Some categories are missing. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 23:55, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. - DFaceG (talk) 01:17, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:23, 23 October 2022 (UTC)