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Kuvara

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 01:51, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:12, 8 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 01:56, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 00:22, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
  4. DwartiiDelver (talk) 21:41, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  5. Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 02:39, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 07:28, 5 February 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • "The fruit was edible plain or dried, with the latter form being known to be stewed with merlie, a creature also found on Qiilura." Does the novel specifically use this type of wording? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:40, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Nope, thanks for the catch. I've adjusted it to be more specific now. TK-462 (talk) 20:49, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • The species the fruit was edible by is currently infobox-exclusive. Imperators II(Talk) 22:36, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thanks. TK-462 (talk) 20:48, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Looking at the source, there's actually more information that you should add to the article, e.g., how Darman treated the dried fruit and Etain's reactions and attitude toward it. Imperators II(Talk) 08:32, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Awesome, thanks for catching that. TK-462 (talk) 05:17, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Well, go ahead and add the rest of it, too - Etain's reaction to the offer and her reason for declining it. Imperators II(Talk) 08:33, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Added, sorry about that. Too many late nights. TK-462 (talk) 16:23, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Please elaborate on "short lifetime" and "such foods".
    • This should still be elaborated on: "to eat such foods".
      • This is still outstanding. Imperators II(Talk) 12:38, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed, sorry about the wait. TK-462 (talk) 20:32, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
  • If Darman offered Etain the dried variety of kuvara, please mention so. Imperators II(Talk) 16:46, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed the two above objections. TK-462 (talk) 21:39, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Did Omega make the stew before or after Darman offered Etain the dried kuvara? Please split up the current bit about the stew into two parts: 1) leave the fact that it could be used in a stew in the first paragraph which serves as a kind of description of the fruit, and 2) note Omega's use of the fruit in their meal in the second paragraph, which acts as an account of the history of the fruit. Imperators II(Talk) 14:39, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I don't think the date needs to be given twice, I'd just keep the second one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:53, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thank you. TK-462 (talk) 05:17, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

DwartiiDelver
  • Not listing this as an objection, but I wonder if it might be possible to replace one of the instances of "also" with another word that gets the same meaning across, or reword that sentence in a way that doesn't require two instances of the word—I feel it may read a little better without using "also" twice (especially with each usage being in such close proximity to one another). DwartiiDelver (talk) 15:32, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Good point, that did look bad. I've fixed the issue now. TK-462 (talk) 20:48, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:28, 5 February 2021 (UTC)