Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kourterel

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Kourterel

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 13:45, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(5 ECs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 00:58, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
2. Zed42 (talk) 07:15, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:05, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
4. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:01, February 7, 2020 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 21:25, February 8, 2020 (UTC)
6. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:29, February 8, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• The article should be written from Kourterel's perspective, i.e. mentioning that he had a child and family first, and then including the information about Verge. Zed42 (talk) 20:19, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:47, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I think that you can state that Kourterel was part of the crew of the Herald given that he's mentioned as part of Seitaron's thoughts on his time on board the Herald observing the crew and Verge. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:38, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorted the second point. There's nothing that states Kourterel served aboard the Herald. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 16:10, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • You should at least mention that he was over viewing Verge's personality based on their time together on the Herald. You're right that saying Kouterel served on the vessel is too much of a stretch, but Verge and Sebitaron must have interacted with him while serving on the ship. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:21, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ok sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 17:31, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
        • Anything I've missed? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:07, February 8, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:37, February 8, 2020 (UTC)