Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Korvalus Tower (second nomination)

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Korvalus Tower

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 19:04, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: grumble

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Support

1. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 14:18, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:17, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:09, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:32, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

Floyd

• One question: Does "turbolaser" need to be capitalized throughout? In most other articles and appearances it isn't. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 02:22, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
  • It's not a traditional turbolaser, it's a Firestorm Turbolaser, which is a proper name. Cade Calrayn 03:42, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, threw me off a bit when I was reading it. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 14:18, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• If the player goes inside the tower is there any details about the interior that can be described? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:30, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn (talk)

OOM

• I'm just going to skim-review this because I haven't finished the Jedi Knight storyline yet, but there's an inconsistency between "the Korvalus Tower" and simply "Korvalus Tower." Which one is correct?
  • It's only mentioned in the quest log and the map name, and the quest log says "the Korvalus Tower Turbolaser". It's unclear but I just went with Korvalus Tower.
• Only the immediate location of the tower and the planet it's on is needed in the infobox
  • Done.
• Quote should be mentioned in the article body itself. Also, seeing that the body is getting rather long, I'd use a paragraph break there. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 08:48, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Did the paragraph break, but I don't see what you're talking about with the quote. It's self-explanatory and the context is given in the discussion of Operation Firestorm. Cade Calrayn (talk) 20:06, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, seems like I missed that bit OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:17, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Inconsistency regarding singular and plural form of "Turbolaser." UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:27, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Cade Calrayn 16:13, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
    • I'm still confused here. You first mention that the Firestorm Turbolaser was installed in multiple places, saying the plot involved multiple "turbolasers" before saying the Jedi Knight destroyed "the Firestorm Turbolaser." UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:19, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
      • oh, sorry, I thought you were referring to the capitalization. They added a turbolaser in each building. Reworded a bit. Cade Calrayn 16:29, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:33, 9 July 2021 (UTC)