Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kirmay clan's farm

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Kirmay clan's farm

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 08:00, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
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Support

  1. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 16:05, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Copy-edit. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:49, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:26, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  4. Nice one! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:00, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 17:50, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Nice to see you on the CAN page, a few things: A quote should be included since there are quite a few in the book.
  • The date in the infobox is unreferenced.
  • Since it only appears in one book, you can remove the "first" from the BTS. Also, saying "albeit unnamed" is unnecessary.
  • The BTS is missing the series of the book. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 08:57, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed the objections. The quote added is the same as the one on the Kirmay clan page, but I'll have the novel in hand on Wednesday if you'd like me to search for a different one. TK-462 (talk) 17:23, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
      • The quote looks good, it's still missing the series of the book, though. (Republic Commando). LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 18:29, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Shit, I forgot to ask you about that. In previous status articles for this novel, its sufficed to just use the full title, as the series name is already included. Personally I feel that it's redundant, but I'm open to suggestion. TK-462 (talk) 18:42, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
          • No worries, it is precedent (example) to note in the BTS the series of the book/episode/comic if there is one. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 15:30, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Just wanted to confirm if Hokan took over the farm that year or if it's ambiguous when he took it over? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:51, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Addressed, thanks man. TK-462 (talk) 06:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Welcome back, TK! Just one thing—quote-exclusive info: you should mention the fact that the villager spoke with RC-1336 in the prose itself and the context of the quote, just so that the reader would know why they were speaking OOM 224 21:58, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Got it, fixed. Thanks! TK-462 (talk) 06:47, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:50, 6 December 2021 (UTC)