Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kilji language

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Kilji language

  • Nominated by: — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 13:12, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: THIRD NOMINATION ON A SERIES OF MORE THAN 20 NOMINATIONS RELATED TO THE KILJI ILLUMINE! (Wookieeproject:Kilji Illumine when)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:06, 15 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:47, 16 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 18:03, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:23, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • It is unnecesarry to contextualise the Kilji as a religous species, especially since their government is identified as a theocracy later on in the same sentence.
    • Done.
  • "Kilji Illumine", a government, is listed under "related languages" in the infobox. Fan26 (Talk) 20:44, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Apparently my edit removing it wasn't performed.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 21:04, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  • I feel like with a little tweaking those first two sentences can be combined.Fan26 (Talk) 03:49, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Looks cleaner.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:01, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • If the Kilji species used the language, it stands to reason that their nation, government and fleet would use the language as well, so I feel like the latter part of the first sentence is unnecessary. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:23, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed. I removed mention of the Kilhorde/Illumine as he [General Crofyp] and his species [The Kilji] were the only ones confirmed to use it. (Discord messages: "Only General Crofyp is confirmed to use it. What you're saying is true, but we only know the species used it because the language was mentioned as "the language of the kiljis;" Nakirre, the leader of the Kiljis, wasn't confirmed to use it in the whole novel all Kiljis appeared in.")
  • Users in the infobox should be the Kilji. There's a handful of language SAs to compare. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:23, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Added.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 14:00, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Just check this :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:06, 15 May 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • I don't think listing individuals in the infobox is really necessary. Just the species should do. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:02, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Removed.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:30, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've been informed that Crofyp and Vassal Two should not be included in the infobox: ""Infoboxes may not contain any field listing individual examples of an article subject, such as members of a species or organization." Wookieepedia:Layout_Guide/In-universe#Infobox — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:30, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:23, 20 May 2022 (UTC)