Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kilji homeland

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Kilji homeland

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Support

  1. —spookywillowwtalk 02:16, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Samonic has helped me understand some of these names Zahn keeps pumping out. Imperators II(Talk) 21:17, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 21:31, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:34, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
  5. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:16, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

What are all these names Zahn keeps pumping out
  • Context for Illumine, Kilhorde, Jixtus, Grysk and Grysk Hegemony, please. :P
  • The article is missing content categories. Imperators II(Talk) 10:59, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Context provided. Some categories added, let me know if there are more categories to be added. Thank you. Samonic Thrawns Chimaera (Talk) 11:28, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • I'm not sure if much can be done about it, but the second sentence seems extremely run-on. Are there ways to work the context in that are less wordy? I had trouble following the line of thought, or connecting it with the homeland.—spookywillowwtalk 19:18, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Changed. Thanks for the help :) (And for objecting, of course) Samonic Thrawns Chimaera (Talk) 21:06, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Needs the conjecture template Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry to interject here, but no, it doesn't. The conjecture template is for articles where Wookieepedia has been forced to come up with a name of its own since the source hasn't given any. As you can see from the quote below, this name is clearly used in the source, so it's not conjectural. Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Probably obvious but I didn't see the below quote... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:40, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Needs the Unknown regions astronomical object category Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • No it doesn't, since it hasn't been identified as an astronomical object. Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Is this a full appearance or a Mo? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • The sole mention of this subject is below. What makes you think wonder if it's a full appearance? Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Audiobook should get the Mo tag then Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:40, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
        • Addressed.
  • Can we say it the Kilji are a native species? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Again, the quote is below, and you can see that saying that it was "home" to the Kilji is as much info as we have got. Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Can you add that it's the final novel in the trilogy? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Review note: Most of these were spotted simply by comparing this article with Grysk homeworld. Always good to compare similar articles and, if you nominate two at the same time, update both as objections come up :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:08, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
    • I'll update both! Thanks for objecting, as always. Samonic Thrawns Chimaera (Talk) 14:03, 16 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • This is the homeland's single mention in the entire novel. I believe it can be useful. 'But he couldn't. Not with the Grysk fleet lurking nearby. Not with them surely knowing where the Kilhorde was and, worse, where the Kilji homeland lay.' Samonic Thrawns Chimaera (Talk) 20:24, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:19, 18 March 2022 (UTC)