Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kelko Dev

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Kelko Dev

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:04, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:17, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 19:50, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 20:16, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 20:20, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• Since the articles are similar, these objections also apply to Sandewar Mandewar:
  • You should mention that Evazan used a pluripleq in order to simulate shape-shifting abilities.
    • Done for both. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:52, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure if we can really confirm that any of Evazan's false disguises were real individuals, or that his description of them is necessarily true.
    • So should I write the article as if they are a character depicted by Evazan or an alleged individual who Evazan has impersonated? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:52, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • We don't know for sure if either are fictional, so just write it as an individual who allegedly exists, according to Evazan. Zed42 (talk) 18:55, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
        • Polished over both articles. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:35, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • After a brief discussion on IRC regarding the use of images when the characters only appear through impersonation, it was suggested that you add a comment next to the name in the infobox reading "impersonation by X depicted" to clarify that the image is not of the character themselves. Zed42 (talk) 18:25, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
    • I'd also suggest putting that comment in parentheses and in <small></small> tags. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:28, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done for both. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:52, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
• The text in this speech bubble in this image needs to be blanked out, as it is partially cut off. Zed42 (talk) 18:14, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
  • I've put in a request to Brules for both but SpookyWillow has chimed in and sorted Kelko Dev, many thanks to him/her. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 07:18, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Just so you know, the Sandewar Mandewar image doesn't need its speech bubble to be edited out, since the text isn't cut off. Zed42 (talk) 09:43, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• I'd say Dev's face is gray, not pale green.
• Rather than quoting from text, I think it'd be better to explain what they actually mean. You can say Aphra said she found her attractive, instead of saying she called her "hot." Or, it's fair to assume Dev was a "ruler" since she "ruled." Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:20, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:03, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
• (Reviewing note) Please be careful of your commas. For example, your recent nominations had dates with missing commas, (i.e. June 27, 2018) and per the Manual of Style, articles shall use the serial comma as standard. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:23, February 15, 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• I'd like the last sentence to be rewritten so it's more in line with the preceding one, regarding her appearance only being Evazan's deception, not any confirmed physical traits. Fan26 (Talk) 17:09, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:38, February 16, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:26, February 16, 2020 (UTC)