- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Keffan
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:38, February 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
—spookywillowwtalk 20:24, February 27, 2020 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 19:36, February 29, 2020 (UTC)
- Zed42 (talk) 19:54, February 29, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:47, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 17:24, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
Object
spookywilloww
Pira Tam and Hazram Namir are missing context.It seems repetitive to use 4 BBY in back-to-back sentences; maybe try to fiddle with it a little."By that time, Keffan could still not his fingers." I think a word's missing.—spookywillowwtalk 22:03, February 26, 2020 (UTC)- All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 07:45, February 27, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Does Ultimate Star Wars mention Crucival by name? It isn't listed in Crucival's Sources nor is it in the book article's Appearances, unless it's missing completely as no one added it yet.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:09, March 1, 2020 (UTC)- That reference was added by Spooky, I don't have Ultimate Star Wars and so I didn't realise it said that Crucival was an Outer Rim world. If it hasn't been added in other articles that doesn't mean it's not true it just means noone's added the info to those. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:52, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
- Then you're gonna have to find another source for the time being or remove it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:54, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- I can pass you the relevant sections of USW via IRC, Ben; the reference might need a touch-up; but Crucival’s sector can be placed definitively in the Outer Rim. Given, not all the USW appearances for either versions of it had ever been completely added, so I never put much stock in other articles unless they’re written up for status.—spookywillowwtalk 12:20, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- Added the reference. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:33, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- Good, but you have to be careful with references like this in future nominations. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:47, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
- Added the reference. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:33, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- I can pass you the relevant sections of USW via IRC, Ben; the reference might need a touch-up; but Crucival’s sector can be placed definitively in the Outer Rim. Given, not all the USW appearances for either versions of it had ever been completely added, so I never put much stock in other articles unless they’re written up for status.—spookywillowwtalk 12:20, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- Then you're gonna have to find another source for the time being or remove it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:54, March 3, 2020 (UTC)
- That reference was added by Spooky, I don't have Ultimate Star Wars and so I didn't realise it said that Crucival was an Outer Rim world. If it hasn't been added in other articles that doesn't mean it's not true it just means noone's added the info to those. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:52, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:24, March 4, 2020 (UTC)