Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kalevala

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Kalevala

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 23:17, January 25, 2017 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another TCW planet and follow up to my nom of bombing on Kalevala.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Nice work Lewisr (talk) 02:37, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:51, January 31, 2017 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:37, February 1, 2017 (UTC)
4. Cevan (talk) 21:45, February 2, 2017 (UTC)
5. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:34, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II

• A slight difference in punctuation between the lead quote in this article and that on the bombing.
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:21, January 27, 2017 (UTC)
• "represented Kalevala" - represented where?
  • Done, though I'm not sure about the world's connection to the New Mandos. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:21, January 27, 2017 (UTC)
• The Galactic Republic should be added to the infobox.
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:21, January 27, 2017 (UTC)
• Context for Coruscant, Mandalore and the Death Watch needed. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:04, January 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:36, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
• 210 words, please provide or draft an intro, maybe it goes over 250. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:03, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
  • Not enough info for a description section, so I just made a separate history section. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 07:05, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • There's kind of a conflict with WP:S Rule #1. Frankly, I don't see a problem with a short description section. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:19, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
      • The note also says this: "If, of course, the information does not appear elsewhere in the article, then it is acceptable to source it in the introduction." As such, I would argue that adding a description section to the article would add nothing. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:58, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I feel it's worth mentioning Merrik's death since he ceases to be senator for the planet. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:30, January 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:36, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
• You don't actually say that Death Watch were behind the bombing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:30, January 26, 2017 (UTC)
  • Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:36, January 29, 2017 (UTC)
    • It is mentioned only. JS-4422 (talk) 05:15, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

The CP

Sorry bud, gotta enforce WP:Sourcing Rule 1: intros should not be cited. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:47, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

• Please see above objection. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 01:49, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
  • Very well. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:34, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Comments

• I didn't want to add this as an objection because I'm not sure if there's an easy fix to this, and we might have to just wing with how it is, but I find the sentences in the history section to feel a lot like run-ons while reading them, even though they're not. This is because of all the context that's needed to be added; the sentences are simply a bit long and unwieldy to me, though I myself have a habit of writing such sentences, and I recognize sometimes there's a need for them. Anyways, take a look at it, but don't pressure yourself too much if you really can't find a way around this. Sol Pacificus^Firestorm 02:39, April 25, 2017 (UTC)