Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jurgan Kalta's carbine

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Jurgan Kalta's carbine

• Nominated by: Exiledjedi 17:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My first comprehensive article nomination.

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support #Nice work.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 20:24, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

1. NAYAYEN 09:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Axinal
   • While I'm not sure this is technically a rule, I'm often told not to link the bolded word(s) in the intro.
   • Is the entry title in the strategy guide misspelled, or is the misspelling just in the entry's text? If the title itself misspells it, you should probably have ("Jurgan Kalta's Combine") next to the guide's title in the Sources section.
   • Gave the article a couple of minor copy-edits. Other than that, very nice.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 20:09, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • I fixed all of these problems.--Exiledjedi 20:16, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
2. Nayayen
   • If an infobox image is less than 250px wide, it should be left at its full size and (ideally) the |imagebg= parameter filled with the average colour of the edges of the image. At any rate, it shouldn't be scaled up to 250px. I may see if I can get a bigger version of it for you.
   • Can you find a way to reword the Characteristics line? The repetition of much more powerful/more powerful/much more accurate is grating, You could change the "even more powerful" to "especially effective" or something.
   • Good otherwise, just goes to show that the backgrounds to some of the weapons in KOTOR are surprisingly detailed :P. NAYAYEN 21:20, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • I shrunk the image down to its normal size, but I was not sure about what background to use. I also reworded the characteristics section.--Exiledjedi 22:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
3. Imperators II
   • I think a brief description of the carbine's visual appearance (color, components, etc.) should be added, as, for example, here. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:02, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
     • I added the material and the article is currently 254 words, so should I move it to the good article nomination page or should I try to trim the word count?--Exiled Jedi^Greetings 03:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
       • I say don't trim it; just ask in the comments for an EC to remove it, and add it to the GANs.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 03:57, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• No quotes are available for this article.--Exiledjedi 17:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
• The article is now 254 words, and thus qualifies for GA status.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 03:56, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
• I'm going to take this article over to the good article nominations page. Please remove it from the list of nominations here.--Exiled Jedi^Greetings 04:07, May 5, 2011 (UTC)