Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jorsooda

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Jorsooda

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 22:23, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Totally forgot to actually create the nom page and went on my bike ride. Whoops!

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. D MCCG D MCCG (chat) 18:22, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Why does TOR have to be so damn complicated? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:11, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:26, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
  4. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 22:15, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:32, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
  6. IFYLOFD (Talk) 12:53, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • "only to be dead a minute later." I'm assuming this means they were killed by the rancor, but it isn't immediately clear. I'd reword it slightly. IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • The date note needs some more clarification. As it stands, it doesn't directly support the fact that Jorsooda died before the time of the operation. Plus, the link between the operation and the codex isn't explained. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 12:47, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Missing info from Codex: "pumped full of adrenals," "particularly flavorful snack," "surprised" OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 15:25, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:33, 9 July 2021 (UTC)