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Jodzia's mayor
- Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 00:56, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The first nomination was removed because I was unable to address the objections due to a vacation; the objections have now been addressed. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 00:56, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 05:17, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 147 words (114 introduction, 33 body, 0 behind the scenes)
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Nice job on getting this back up after the prior nom Lewisr (talk) 18:19, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:12, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 05:16, 19 January 2024 (UTC)
Object
Lew
We can date the incident to 229 BBY. Shadows of Starlight 1 establishes that the Travyx Prime events are 6 months after Starlight's fall, and Star Wars: The High Republic Character Encyclopedia dates this to 229 BBY. And given that the mention in Eye of Darkness takes place before Veter's death (which again the encyclopedia dates to 229 BBY) it can certainly be put in that yearLewisr (talk) 01:43, 16 January 2024 (UTC)- How's that? ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 03:03, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, I realised while going through that it was actually a lot more complicated resulting in Template:AttackonBantooDate, does this work with you? Lewisr (talk) 04:38, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, that looks good, thanks for creating the template. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 12:35, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, that looks good, thanks for creating the template. ThrawnChiss7
- Sorry, I realised while going through that it was actually a lot more complicated resulting in Template:AttackonBantooDate, does this work with you? Lewisr (talk) 04:38, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
- How's that? ThrawnChiss7
Do we know that Bantoo was sealed off in 229 BBY? My reading is that it was sealed off when the Stormwall was originally erected (dated to 230 BBY by the encyclopedia)Lewisr (talk) 02:49, 18 January 2024 (UTC)- When I wrote it, I meant sealed as a noun, but you're right, it sounds liked it was sealed as a verb; I reworded that article so that it does not mention when Bantoo was sealed, because that not super relevant to the mayor. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 03:27, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
- When I wrote it, I meant sealed as a noun, but you're right, it sounds liked it was sealed as a verb; I reworded that article so that it does not mention when Bantoo was sealed, because that not super relevant to the mayor. ThrawnChiss7
Last thing, I think it would be worth briefly giving some context for what the Occlusion Zone is, see Reventine for exampleLewisr (talk) 04:13, 18 January 2024 (UTC)- Sure, added. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 12:35, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
- Sure, added. ThrawnChiss7
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:16, 19 January 2024 (UTC)