- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Jodzia's mayor
- Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 23:21, 5 December 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:20, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 132 words (99 introduction, 33 body, 0 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR
(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)
Support
Object
Lew
- I think it might be better to say that Bantoo was sealed (what the book says or an alternative is fine) inside the Occlusion Zone behind the Stormwall than just located in the Occlusion Zone Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
- When you talk about the mayor refusing to pay the tithes, you should note they brought up Bantoo's sealing inside the Occlusion Zone Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 14 December 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
- I think the "raging storm" metaphor is a little confusing to someone unfamiliar with Nihil terms. I would recommend rewording or removing that bit. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:50, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (EC only)
Overdue objections for over 2 weeks, attempt to contact nominator wa s unsuccessful. Alsoy have a holiday tag up with no idea of their return. Can renom when they are back and with the current objections addressed Lewisr (talk) 19:17, 29 December 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 19:19, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
NBDani (they/them)Yeager's Repairs 19:19, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
