Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jelven Donn

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Jelven Donn

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 18:47, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. LucaRoR (Talk) 06:49, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 21:25, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:54, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:22, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 21:01, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

LucaRoR
  • I think this article could use a paragraph break, it isn't unclear as it is, but it just doesn't look "clean" to me...
  • There are many passive voice sentences that make the article "heavy": you may want to change some of them.
  • I don't think that the words previously and unreachable need a "-" between them. I might be wrong, though. LucaRoR (Talk) 20:09, 17 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:01, 24 July 2021 (UTC)