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Iotran Guard
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:08, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
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Support
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 10:15, 12 August 2021 (UTC)- I just switched the wording of the bts to avoid using the phrase "was first mentioned" twice in a row. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:10, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 17:01, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
No relation to Iotran?UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:52, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
Currently, in the first sentence, it seems as though Tost was leader of the Banking Clan. I recommend reorganising the line to prevent confusion.OOM 224 14:20, 16 August 2021 (UTC)- Is that a little better? I can reword it entirely if needed. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:23, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:58, 17 August 2021 (UTC)