- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Igern
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:22, November 18, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Been a while since I made any CA noms
(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
- <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 02:44, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 22:18, November 21, 2015 (UTC)
- ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:53, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
Although would the artist link count as a composer? Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 03:16, December 28, 2015 (UTC)- Imperators II(Talk) 09:43, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
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ProfessorTofty
This is probably really nitpicky, but I'm mentioning it because it applies to your other nomination as well. Unless I'm mistaken, everything has to be sourced, even a Behind the scenes statement saying that something first appeared in something.- I've asked on the IRC to check, but if you look back through other CAs there's plenty of precedent. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:35, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
- The BTS in this instance is self sourcing as it mentions the source that would be referenced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:35, November 24, 2015 (UTC)j
- Hmm, I could have sworn I was told before that I still needed to source it on one of mine, but I guess maybe not. I'll defer to you, and what you heard on IRC, on this. ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:53, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
- The BTS in this instance is self sourcing as it mentions the source that would be referenced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:35, November 24, 2015 (UTC)j
- I've asked on the IRC to check, but if you look back through other CAs there's plenty of precedent. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:35, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
I think the second part of the second sentence might have more impact if it were changed to read "students in the Core Worlds Classical Culture class at the Royal Imperial Academy on the planet Coruscant studied this composer's works." Up to you, though.ProfessorTofty (talk) 22:17, November 24, 2015 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:35, November 24, 2015 (UTC)
Imperators II
Could you please find some synonym for "famous"/"famed"? I believe that four times in two sentences is a bit too repetitive. Sorry for the nitpicking :)- Changed out two of them to what I'm reasonably certain are equivalents. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:07, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
- Nice! Imperators II(Talk) 09:43, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
- Changed out two of them to what I'm reasonably certain are equivalents. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:07, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
Also, the same question about the Age of the Empire pipelink as on the professor nomination.Imperators II(Talk) 01:59, January 1, 2016 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:07, January 2, 2016 (UTC)